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Mood:
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Listening to: Sabaton - Screaming Eagles
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Reading: Quest threads and related stories.
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Watching: Infinite Stratos
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Playing: Skyrim
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Eating: EGGS AND BACON.
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Drinking: Ginger Ale, cranberry juice, rum. Delicious!
So, while it's certainly been longer than I had intended, I'm getting ready to start writing more Heartcore Harem. Yay!
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Yeah. So. I need some feedback from my readers. We're halfway through Bonding all the girls, at two of four. I've been trying to use the Bonding scene as a chance to explore the characters' interactions and personalities in a personal setting (standing practically nude tends to make things that way, I would thnk), and I have two more to do. I'm intending to write them out fully, since it would be a disservice to leave one or both out after doing the others. However, I wanted to know - is that what people want? I'm worried the repetition might be a bit boring, but this far in I'm not sure.
So tell me, my dearies - are you all okay with me writing out two more Bonding scenes fully, or should I find some way to summarize them?
I suppose it all comes down to the remaining two girls' experiences with Syranon himself before the Bondings. SuKo was necessity and Teo was intrigue after the fact. I can understand your desire to perform Ame's, but you did kind of write yourself into a hole with Eme, didn't you? XD
Her interaction with the love-love assassin that Syranon's becomes due to her concoction means there's still hope yet. Perhaps once he's scraped his brains off'a Amethyst's knuckles, you could get her out of that lab of her's and have her set up a kind of get-together in the guise of a more personal experiment?
Shush! No holes here!
And get outta my mind, durn it! Those are MY plot secrets to reveal!
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA
Overall, Heartcore Harem has been a treat to read so far. You're doing great; it's awesome to see such iconic characters in a slightly different light.
Many thanks. No idea when the next bit will be posted yet, but I've been getting back to work on it.